Professional Feedback 3

I spoke with Robert Pennington, photography instructor, about my site and 
this was his feedback:

My navigation is simple, effective, but needs more depth.

My work represented is very editorial in nature and he would like to see 
more detail in creating, variety, or more depth in areas I would like to pursue.

His thoughts regarding my logo are that the a&m were well blended, however 
with the horizontal lines it appears very environmental (ocean and mountains) 
and seems more corporate than personal. 
My response was that I am from Colorado and now live in Seattle was the 
inspiration for the design.

His response to my resume is that it is too thin and does not set me apart 
from other applicants. It minimizes my accomplishments.

He feels I have used too much white in my design and that my artwork should 
be more integrated into the over all look. Also, more typography development 
is needed.

He noted that videos can be used if they are short, not silly, and professional in 
content and appearance.